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Hello.
I made a sentence
It is interesting that you also work for a hair salon .
My hair salon is known to hair cut well.
Where is your hair salon located?
My hair salon is located near Gocheok Neighborhood market.
My hair salon is located on the 1st floor of Gaebong First church.
What kind of facilities are there in your hair salon?
Have a nice day.
I made a sentence
It is interesting that you also work for a hair salon .
My hair salon is known to hair cut well.
Where is your hair salon located?
My hair salon is located near Gocheok Neighborhood market.
My hair salon is located on the 1st floor of Gaebong First church.
What kind of facilities are there in your hair salon?
Have a nice day.
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