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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello Ha(u
we would like to discuss the schedule that was postponed earlier and hold a meeting next week to discuss the following topics:
• Introduction to LG CNS Solution MDD(Model Driven Development) overview and showcasing successful implementation cases in oversea&korea.
• Case study on M/F Modernization (specifically Jeju Bank case).
• Introduction to Super Mobile APP project on Shinhan Bank (Digital Channel area)
How about conducting the online meeting as below?
1) 12/4(月) 10:00 - 11:00
we would like to discuss the schedule that was postponed earlier and hold a meeting next week to discuss the following topics:
• Introduction to LG CNS Solution MDD(Model Driven Development) overview and showcasing successful implementation cases in oversea&korea.
• Case study on M/F Modernization (specifically Jeju Bank case).
• Introduction to Super Mobile APP project on Shinhan Bank (Digital Channel area)
How about conducting the online meeting as below?
1) 12/4(月) 10:00 - 11:00
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