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E-mail (When rescheduling a meeting)

작성자: mangolang_junmin88@l 담당 튜터: Heni1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Case1
How about conducting the online meeting at the below time?
• 11/21 (火) 15:30-17:00
please let me know your availability time slot.

We prefer to conduct the meeting using Webex or Teams for online meeting.

Case2
We are planning to go on a business trip to Tokyo in the coming week of Nov. 21.
Below are suggest time slots for face-to-face meeting.
11/21 (火) 13:30-15:00
11/21 (火) 15:30-17:00
if not available, please let me know your availability time slot.
Besides, it would be greatly appreciated if you could provide some agenda in advance.
I look forward to your response.
튜터 교정 답변

Case1
How about conducting the online meeting at the below time?
• 11/21 (火) 15:30-17:00
Please let me know your availability time slot.

We prefer to conduct the meeting using Webex or Teams {for AN online meeting)

Case2
We are planning to go on a business trip to Tokyo in the coming week of Nov. 21.
Below are suggestED time slots for A face-to-face meeting.
11/21 (火) 13:30-15:00
11/21 (火) 15:30-17:00
If not available, please let me know your availability time slot.
Besides, it would be greatly appreciated if you could provide AN agenda in advance..
I look forward to your response.

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