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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 12. 07 조회 4303

12/6 diary

작성자: mangolang_junmin88@l 담당 튜터: Heni1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
i had hangover because I drank a lot yesterday,
however, I got better after drinking tomato juice

I was too busy when in office
after work, I met my wife, ate pasta, wine in the evening
and came home

As my English teacher recommended, I will write diary to improve my english level
튜터 교정 답변

I had A hangover because I drank a lot yesterday,
However, I got better after drinking tomato juice.

I was too busy when in THE office.
After work, I met my wife, ate pasta, AND DRANK wine in the evening
and came home.

As my English teacher recommended, I will write IN A  diary to improve my English level.

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