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Business email

작성자: mangolang_junmin88@l 담당 튜터: Heni1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Ha.

Thank you for participating in the meeting today despite your busy schedule.

We hope that through today's meeting, you could gain a brief understanding of Jeju Bank's implementation case and the introduction of the MDD tool (DevOn IDE).

The attached materials are the ones used during today's meeting.

Although there may be some translation issues, please feel free to use the Q&A sheet if you have any questions while reviewing the materials.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Ha.

Thank you for participating in the meeting today despite your busy schedule.

We hope that through today's meeting, you CAN gain a brief understanding of Jeju Bank's implementation case and the introduction of the MDD tool (DevOn IDE).

The attached materials are the ones used during today's meeting.

Although there may be some translation issues, please feel free to use the Q&A sheet if you have any questions while reviewing the materials.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!