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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 12. 12 조회 4491

japan business trip 12/12

작성자: mangolang_junmin88@l 담당 튜터: Heni1
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I came on a business trip to Japan today! It was short because it was a two-day schedule, but it was so nice to have a spa on the roof of the hotel
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I came on a business trip to Japan today! It was short because it was a two-day schedule, but it was so nice to have a spa on the roof of the hotel.

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