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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 12. 27 조회 4448

New Year Goal

작성자: mangolang_junmin88@l 담당 튜터: Heni1
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I registered yesterday for exercising Gym. I start exercising again after about a year. I gained too much weight because I didn't exercise. My new year's goal is to exercise and get a license next year.
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I registered yesterday for a gym.membership.   IHAVE BEEN exercising again after about a year. I gained too much weight because I didn't exercise. My new year's goal is to exercise and get a license next year.

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