the end of the year with my father.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Since it is the end of the year, my father came to Seoul from my hometown two days ago.
I ate delicious beef, wine, and whiskey with my father, and went hiking and hot spring the next day.
It was nice that my girlfriend and father spent time together.
I want to continue being filial to my father.
I ate delicious beef, wine, and whiskey with my father, and went hiking and hot spring the next day.
It was nice that my girlfriend and father spent time together.
I want to continue being filial to my father.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!