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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 10 조회 14299

surfing the internet

작성자: 1101160011 담당 튜터: Mitch2
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There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com.
I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing.
also I see soccer infomation to goal.com.
Facebook is a great way to
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[CORRECTION]

There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com.

-> There are several websites out there, but the websites I visit the most are Facebook and Goal.com.

I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing.

-> I like to visit Facebook because I can see how my friends are doing. 

also I see soccer infomation to goal.com. Facebook is a great way to

-> Also I can see some soccer information on Goal.com. Facebook is a great way to...

[COMMENT]

Hi, Aaron! 

You were able to tell about the websites you visit the most. I just want you to take note of your plural nouns, verbs and modifiers. Keep it up!

Have a great evening,

Teacher Mitch ^_^

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