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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 01. 06 조회 4425

I was drawn to a girl.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I'm hooked on a girl group audition program 'Universe ticekt' these days. I only watched short video on Youtube, but I fell in love with a girl from Philippines. Her name is 'Elisia'. I thought you when I knew where she came from. She is so pretty and tanlented. I loved her voice at first, and I also found she dance very well. Whatever stage she is on, she always shines. I can't know about her a lot, but I can believe she is kind and try to help others like you! When I saw that she encouraged and complimented other friends, I thought "Oh, It's very similar with my English teacher!"
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Just finished a video of Elisia's audition. And I must say, "WOW"~~~~ She can dance and sing very well.~ ^^ At first I thought she's not the one singing and I got so surprised that it's her real voice.~ Wow~~~ amazing~ ^^ Above all, I envy her because she can speak Korean language fluently. How I wish I could also understand and speak Korean fluently~~~~ ^^ 

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