I was drawn to a girl.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm hooked on a girl group audition program 'Universe ticekt' these days. I only watched short video on Youtube, but I fell in love with a girl from Philippines. Her name is 'Elisia'. I thought you when I knew where she came from. She is so pretty and tanlented. I loved her voice at first, and I also found she dance very well. Whatever stage she is on, she always shines. I can't know about her a lot, but I can believe she is kind and try to help others like you! When I saw that she encouraged and complimented other friends, I thought "Oh, It's very similar with my English teacher!"
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