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Lesson3,Compreension Check

작성자: hri1_yongbeom.cho@hl 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1.Netflix provided mail-based DVD rental service before launched one of the largest media-streaming which is available in 190 countries around the world.
2. Recently, About 190 countries is able to access Netflix's streaming service using cell phone, smart TV or etc.
Which means we can use Netflix wherever we want to.
3. The Netflix's first original one is "House of Cards", premiered on February 1, 2013.
I watch first America's drama at 12 years old, titled "24" which was broadcasted by FOX in 2001.
4. "Stranger Things" one of famous Netflix's show was nominated for over 30 awards.
Thank you!
튜터 교정 답변

1.Netflix provided mail-based DVD rental service before launched one of the largest media-streaming which is available in 190 countries around the world.  WE WILL HAVE TO TALK ABOUT THIS, SO THAT I CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT IT IS YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY.
2. Recently, About 190 countries is able to access Netflix's streaming service using cell phone, smart TV or etc.
Which means we can use Netflix wherever we want to.  COUNTIRES ARE ABLE      CELL PHNOES, SMART TY, ETC.
3. The Netflix's first original one is "House of Cards", premiered on February 1, 2013. NETFLIX'S FIRST ORIGINAL MOVIE WAS "HOUSE OF CARDS" WHICH 
I watch first America's drama at 12 years old, titled "24" which was broadcasted by FOX in 2001.  AT AGE 12, I WATCHED MY FIRST AMERICAN DRAMA, TITLED '24".  iT WAS BROADCASTED BY FOX IN 2001. 
4. "Stranger Things" one of famous Netflix's show was nominated for over 30 awards. "STRANDER THINGS", A FAMOUS NETFLIX SHOW, .......
Thank you!

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