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Elisia is the first member of debut!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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'Elisia' of the program 'Universe Ticket' is to be a first member of debut! Actually, as another girl was the highest level, so I expected she will be the first member. But 'Elisia' was voted a lot, she became the first member. I was surprised and happy. She deserves to debut and to get love from fans. She can express variety emotion with voice, and her skill is amazing. And I like her confident appearance. I think her confidence comes out from her wonderful skills. I want to learn her confidence and positive mind.
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Hello~ ^^ 

Got to watch it!~ ^^ I am likewise  very happy to know about it. I feel so proud that a Filipino made it to be the first member to debut. It's a highly anticipated contest joined by young girls from different countries. On behalf of my fellow Filipinos, we are so grateful that Koreans appreciate the talent of our fellow Filipino.~ ^^ I'll keep watching the next episodes.~ ^^ 

 

**Correction: 

Elisia from the program 'Universe Ticket' will be the first member to make her debut! Actually, since another female was at the highest rank, I expected her to be the first member. But 'Elisia' received a lot of votes and became the first member. I was shocked and happy. She deserves to make her debut and be loved by her fans. She has an incredible ability to communicate a wide range of emotions through her voice. And I appreciate her confident demeanour. I believe her confidence stems from her excellent skills. I wish to learn about her confidence and optimistic mindset. 

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