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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 01. 20 조회 3851

I reserved a new phone today!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I reserved a new phone and I will get it late this month. I have been using my phone for three years. It's still working well, but the bettary runs out fast and the storage is almost full. As soon as I said "I have only 2GB.", the staff reacted "Are you really using 254GB now?" He couldn't believe that I used 100GB for videos or pictures. I was thinking about changing my phone in the new year, but I hasitated. This is my first time buying a phone by myself. While my parents bought me a phone by now, since I'm earning I bought it on my own. I was pretty tense, but I felt I became a real adult.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello~ ^^ 

Congratulations as you were able to unlock some on your bucket list as an adult.~ ^^ I am so happy that you are now enjoying new discoveries of things you can do.~ ^^ Thank you for sharing!~ ^^ By the way, what's the brand of your new phone?~ ^^ 

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