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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 01. 27 조회 4110

Making sentences with new words from last class.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
She successfully made a presentation in front of the clients.
He messed up his presentation because the projection screen didn't work.
I didn't know this curtain is pull-down one.
His flip chart is old since he watched it frequently.
Her husband is typical doting dad.
According to a sing, we need to go thirty minutes more since now.
This project was done last week.
He will show up about 10 minutes away.
I will set up the meeting room that you can use anytime.
Every single room is occupiying.
I think my boss will come back in any minutes.
튜터 교정 답변

She successfully made a presentation in front of the clients. -- *Correct sentence~ ^^ 

He messed up his presentation because the projection screen didn't work.-- *Correct sentence~ ^^ 


I didn't know this curtain is pull-down one. ---- *Correct sentence~ ^^ 


His flip chart is old since he watched it frequently. 

Better say: His flip chart is old since he watched on it frequently. 


Her husband is typical doting dad.

Better say: Her husband is a typical doting dad. 


According to a sing, we need to go thirty minutes more since now.

Better say: According to the song, we need to go for another thirty minutes now. 


This project was done last week. ---- *Correct sentence~ ^^ 


He will show up about 10 minutes away. 

Better say: He will show up in about 10 minutes. 


I will set up the meeting room that you can use anytime.

Better say: I will set up the meeting room for you to use at any time.


Every single room is occupiying.

Better say: Every room is occupied.


I think my boss will come back in any minutes.

Better say: I think my boss will be back in a few minutes.

 

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