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I received a new phone today~!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I got a new phone today, and my phone's brand is Samsung. Actually, I have only been using Samsung devices since I bought first phone. I'd never used Apple devices. My phone, laptop, computer and even wireless earphone are all by Samsung. I'm a heavy user of Samsung. I heard other countries without Korea are motely using Apple devices. I know Apple's devices are good, but Samsung's devices are famillar to me because I have used it for a long time. I know it very well so that I can use almost functions. I expect carefully, I think I will use Samsung's devices forever. Which brand are you using?
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Hello~ 

Wow~ glad to hear you got your new phone~ ^^ 

With me, I have been using Samsung devices for a long time. There was a time I tried using an iphone. It was iphone6+ few years ago, however, I switched back to Samsung because I would often forget my Apple ID password and would eventually gave me difficulty accessing my phone.~ kkkk~~~ I love Samsung and most people in the Philippines as well prefer Samsung phones because of it's friendly-user feature.~ ^^ 

 

 

I got a new phone today, and my phone's brand is Samsung. Actually, I have only been using Samsung devices since I bought first phone. I'd never used Apple devices. My phone, laptop, computer and even wireless earphone are all by Samsung. I'm a heavy user of Samsung. I heard other countries without Korea are motely using Apple devices. I know Apple's devices are good, but Samsung's devices are famillar to me because I have used it for a long time. I know it very well so that I can use almost functions. I expect carefully, I think I will use Samsung's devices forever. Which brand are you using?

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