my neighborhood
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I live in Seoul, Gildong village.
Than elsewhere in the neighborhood of Seoul there are many homes.
(Other city is.....many high building, apartment)
A short walk from my home hub parks.
I finished work early in the movement from there.
The park is always many people walk out.
Park as close to the city is so crowded that I like my neighborhood.
I lived fifteen years old.
I want continue to live here.
Than elsewhere in the neighborhood of Seoul there are many homes.
(Other city is.....many high building, apartment)
A short walk from my home hub parks.
I finished work early in the movement from there.
The park is always many people walk out.
Park as close to the city is so crowded that I like my neighborhood.
I lived fifteen years old.
I want continue to live here.
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