These days, AFC Asiancup is my interest.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I always watch sports games when the Olympics or Asian game start. I saw every event, and I like watching soccer more. I also watched this Asiancup, i was upset but I was satisfied the fact that my country won. Our team's play was bad and wasn't in harmony. The players that working in abroad clubs showed perfect play, but I believed the other players couldn't support them. I felt they relied on some of famous players. I thought the director's strategy was wrong and most of players were complacent. I strongly think we should change our strategy. I hope our team will be better next game.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!