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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 02. 03 조회 3832

These days, AFC Asiancup is my interest.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I always watch sports games when the Olympics or Asian game start. I saw every event, and I like watching soccer more. I also watched this Asiancup, i was upset but I was satisfied the fact that my country won. Our team's play was bad and wasn't in harmony. The players that working in abroad clubs showed perfect play, but I believed the other players couldn't support them. I felt they relied on some of famous players. I thought the director's strategy was wrong and most of players were complacent. I strongly think we should change our strategy. I hope our team will be better next game.
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Hello~ 

Oh wow~ I didn't know you're also quite interested in sports. ^^ I have read articles also about Korea's previous games. One of my students also mentioned his sadness over Korea's loss against Jordan. T.T 

Nice observation anyway with the last game you watched. ^^ 

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