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Making sentences with new words from last classes~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We should do pricing before we open our store.
Can I finish this project within two and a half minutes?
We have a regular customer, and he always orders hot chamomile tea.
I and my parents have different perspective in traveling alone.
That store have been doing special offer since last month.
She was absolutely awesome when she was a athlete.
Reading is what he do when he is simply bored.
He always blames another when he make a wrong choice.
I wanted to ask her, but she seemed like hectic.
This band uses understatements in their lyrics.
You can work right away once you fill out this form.
튜터 교정 답변

We should do pricing before we open our store. -- Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Can I finish this project within two and a half minutes?-- Correct sentence~ ^^ 


We have a regular customer, and he always orders hot chamomile tea. -- Correct sentence~ ^^ 


I and my parents have different perspective in traveling alone.

Better say: My parents and I have different perspectives on traveling alone.


That store have been doing special offer since last month.

Better say: That store has been running special offers since last month.


She was absolutely awesome when she was a athlete.

Better say: She was amazing as an athlete.


Reading is what he do when he is simply bored.

Better say: Reading is what he does when he is simply bored.


He always blames another when he make a wrong choice.

Better say: He always blames others when he makes a bad decision.


I wanted to ask her, but she seemed like hectic.

Better say: I wanted to ask her, but she seemed busy. 


This band uses understatements in their lyrics. --Correct sentence~ ^^ 


You can work right away once you fill out this form.--Correct sentence~ ^^ 

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