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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 02. 11 조회 3907

I got a haircut last weekend.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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For about three month, I had been growing out my hair because I couldn't decide which style I'll do. Recentely, I made a decision having a perm. My hair was pretty long and I wanted to keep my hair length which approximated precent length. I agreed to get a haircut little bit, but I think it's too short. So I thought 'I messed up my hair.' But when I went to office, every colleagues said "Your hair very good on you! I couldn't never match if I got a hair style like you." At first, I thought 'It's not bad', and later 'I could be getting to like this hair.' Now, I'm feeling satisfaction somehow.
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Wow~ I wanna see your new gorgeous hair~ ^^ Enjoy your new lovely hair!~ ^^ 

 

Correction:

I had been growing out my hair for approximately three months since I couldn't determine which style I wanted to do. Recently, I decided to get a perm. My hair was quite long, and I wanted to retain it at roughly the same length. I agreed to have a haircut, but I believe it is too short. So I thought, "I messed up my hair." But when I went to work, every colleague commented, "Your hair looks great on you! I could never match if I had a hairstyle like you." At first, I thought, "It's not bad," and later, "I could be getting to like this hair." Now, I'm feeling satisfied in some way.

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