Relieve Stress(Stock Chart)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
After exercise, I study stock chart.
I think that the reason about stress is to make more money.
So easily to make money is to relieve stress.
I started to study stock chart about 8 years ago.
I thought there is a sign on the chart about stock price is rising point.
Unfortunately, I haven't found a sign yet.
korea has no income tax on the stock unlike America.
I want to make money as soon as possible.
Then I will quit my job and have other hobbies, like a golf.
I try to make money about unearned income.
I think that the reason about stress is to make more money.
So easily to make money is to relieve stress.
I started to study stock chart about 8 years ago.
I thought there is a sign on the chart about stock price is rising point.
Unfortunately, I haven't found a sign yet.
korea has no income tax on the stock unlike America.
I want to make money as soon as possible.
Then I will quit my job and have other hobbies, like a golf.
I try to make money about unearned income.
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