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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 02. 17 조회 4145

Making sentences with new words.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I lent him a copy of Harry Potter, but he still didn't give me back.
You should CC your team boss when you send an e-mail to another department.
I shot her an e-mail because she hurried, but she didn't even open it yet.
I exchanged some talk with a man sitting next to me on the plane.
She always calls me when I'm working busily and she bother me.
What matter is bothering you?
There isn't an approval mark on your document.
The discrepancies like these make an unnecessary cost.
I accidentally spelled wrong name of recipient, as a result, the post arrived to a stranger.
튜터 교정 답변

I lent him a copy of Harry Potter, but he still didn't return it.
When sending an email to another department, be sure to CC your team leader.
I sent her an email because she was in a hurry, but she has yet to open it.

I chatted with a man seated next to me on the plane.
She always phones me while I'm working and bothers me.
What issue is affecting you?
There is no approval mark on your document.
Such differences incur an unnecessary cost.
I accidentally spelled the recipient's name incorrectly, resulting in the post being delivered to a stranger.

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