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I made some sentences about last class.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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That's unlikely there aren't people in the amusement park at this hour.
Judging from the way he works, he will take a couple hours to find an answer.
Could you wait a minutes for me here?
The company suggested me increasing of salary 4percent.
I have already placed an order half an hour.
Since then he worked for the company, all stocks aren't matched.
Your membership is going to take effect since tomorrow, so you can't watch sports channel today.
Are you playing games at this hour? It's already two a.m!
I decided not to accept her suggestions.
Mathing system of this app is absolutely terrible.
튜터 교정 답변

It's doubtful that there are no people in the amusement park at this hour.
According to the way he works, he will take a few hours to discover an answer.
Could you perhaps wait a few minutes for me here?
The employer advised that I increase my compensation by 4%.
I've already placed an order in half an hour.
Since then, he has worked for the corporation; however, not all stocks are matched.
Your membership will take effect tomorrow, thus you will be unable to view the sports channel today.
Do you play games at this hour? It's already 2 a.m.!
I choose not to accept her ideas.
This app's math system is horrible.

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