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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 02. 24 조회 4415

I started my blogs!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I started two blogs recently. One is about my trip and the other is about my career. I've been thinking how to remember my trip. Memories can disappear, so I decided to write blogs. And I'll record lots of tips about trip. I'm going to run my youtube channel someday. Also, the other blog is for recording that I'd worked current company. It's for me when I work other company later. Before I thought it's important to capture with my eyes, but these days I'm feeling an importance of record. So I'm trying to take a picture everything special. I understand now why my mom said "Pictures are all."
튜터 교정 답변

Hello!~

Yeah~ I agree. We should cherish every moment.~ ^^ Let me know if you already have your YouTube channel and I'll be one of your avid subscribers. ^^

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