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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 11 조회 14276

Weather and lesson ..

작성자: 71219 담당 튜터: Bree
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As you man know, It's very hot and humid here in summer.
Especially, it was really muggy last night.
I couldn't sleep well.

I'm feeling low today, but nevertheless I'd like to tell myself "Cheer up".
It won't be long until this weekend.
It's already Friday afternoon today.


I can remember our previous lesson in Unit 9 was about "Prior Approval".
I can see that
Should a employee has any packages to send out, he needs prior approval from his boss.

In addition,
I found out the estimated period of delivery in case of domestic and international shipment.
It will be delivered 2~3 days and one week respectively.

Of cource,
It depends on the recipient region and the way of transportation, for example via air, sea etc.
튜터 교정 답변

You must have heard that it's hot and humid in Korea every Summer.

Last night was very muggy.

I couldn't sleep well.

I feel so down today, but nevertheless, I should tell myself to 'cheer up'.

It won't be long and it's finally weekend.

It's already Friday afternoon now.

I can remember our previous lesson in Unit 9 about "Prior Approval".

I understand that should an employee send any packages out, he needs prior approval from his boss.

In addition, I learned that the estimated period of deliver for domestic and international shipment.

It will take 2-3 days and one week respectively.

Of course, it depends on the recipient's region and mode of transportation. For example. via airfreight, ship, etc.

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