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Making sentences with new words from last class!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It seems that she wants to say a few words to her team leader.
He is your family, but he is in the opposite team right now.
Some people always speak negative.
Do you want to ask me that I cheated your friend? Not at all!
She is hardworking more than anyone else.
Everyone likes him because he always works proactive even though it's not his job.
It's so cute that her son wants compliment anytime.
My mom always praises me whatever I do.
Let's come up with a fabulous idea for next week's meeting.
We hereby strongly suggest to discount 5% of all.
튜터 교정 답변

It seems that she wants to say a few words to her team leader. -- *Correct sentence~ ^^ 

He is your family, but he is in the opposite team right now. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Some people always speak negative.

--> Some people always speak negatively. 


Do you want to ask me that I cheated your friend? Not at all!

--> Do you want to ask me if I cheated on your friend? Not at all!


She is hardworking more than anyone else. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Everyone likes him because he always works proactive even though it's not his job. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


It's so cute that her son wants compliment anytime.

--> It's so cute that her son wants a compliment anytime.  


My mom always praises me whatever I do.

--> My mom always praises me in whatever I do. 


Let's come up with a fabulous idea for next week's meeting. --*Correct sentence~ ^^ 


We hereby strongly suggest to discount 5% of all.

--> We strongly recommend a 5% discount on all.

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