I like to take a walk with sunshine.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Since one year ago, I have been hurting my back. So I started taking a walk for an hour in a day as my doctor said. At first time, I felt it's a hassle. It's too hard exercise after work. But I must do it, I've been doing exercise an hour almost everyday. The gym is not opened on Sunday, so I take a walk to outside. It was pretty boring for me at first, but now I came to like taking a walk to outdoor. I love taking a walk with the warm sunshine. I realized recently that I'm influenced from weather a lot. The day with cloud I feel a bit dipressing, but the day with sunshine my mood is higher.
튜터 교정 답변
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