Good afternoon Lucky, my opinion after reading L.16

Yongbeom, thank you for this message.  Here are my corrections and suggestions.  Added words are in CAPITAL LETTERS, while removed words are in (     ).

In my hometown, (T should be t) there is a library about 10 minutes away from my home.
I usually visit (remove to) there when i want to read something(add,) regardless of THE subject(remove 's').
(The) MY latest visit (is) WAS 3 weeks (age) AGO.   (for trying) I WANTED to read ('How to win friends & influence people') 'How to Win Friends and Influence People'(add ,)  by Dale Carnegie.
The reason (why i tried) I WANTED to read it is THAT one of my senior co-worker recommended THE BOOK IS SOMETHING THAT EVERYONE "must read (in our live) AT LEAST ONCE THEIR LIFE".  (Notice that liFe is a noun, while liVe is a verb).

(Though i could borrow the book as a e-book with the rise of digital tech, not visiting the library,)  EVEN WITH THE RISE IN POPULARITY OF DIGITAL BOOKS, THE BOOK WAS NOT AVAILABLE AS AN E-BOOK.  (i went) I HAD TO VISIT THE LIBRARY TO GET IT AND bring it (in) BACK TO my comfortable apartment. Hard (copy is) COPIES ARE good for me(add ,) so libraries ARE still relevant placeS FOR ME.