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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 03. 17 조회 3998

I met my high school friends in a long time.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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I met my high school friends this Saterday. Some of them met three month ago, but one of them met 4 years ago. It was a very special and we prepared a surprise birthday party for one. My friends and I were quite nervous because it has been a long time since we had a surprise party. But it perfectly succeeded. She was really happy, so she paid cafe for us. In the cafe, she gushed out a coffee after saw our photoes and the table turned into a sea of laughter. After we went to the board game cafe, I laughed and shouted a lot. As a result, my voice is hoarse on Sunday.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello!~ 

Wow~ that was such a wonderful time.~ ^^ Hope you will have more of that fun time together with your friends.~ ^^ 

 

**CORRECTION: 

I met my high school friends this Saterday.

--> I met my high school friends on Saturday.

Some of them met three month ago, but one of them met 4 years ago.

--> I met some of them three months ago, but I met one of them four years ago. 

She was really happy, so she paid cafe for us.

--> She was so thrilled that she paid for us at the cafe. 

 As a result, my voice is hoarse on Sunday.

--> As a result, my voice became hoarse on Sunday.

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