I watched the high school baseball game!
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I've been watching the high school baseball game two years ago, because there are baseball parks nearby my home. I hadn't known about the high school baseball game, but I came across the game was continuing when I was taking a walk. Ever since I'm seeing the game when the high school baseball game season is comming. It's a little different with pro-baseball league. It seems like watching a sports animation. They are passionate, and they always shouting to their team players to encourage them. I feel that I'm back to school when I'm watching them. I love excitement that comes from this place.
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