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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 04. 06 조회 3888

This essay is about a board game that you told me, scrabble!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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While I haven't listened to about the scrabble, after searching, I thought it is similar with cross ward game! I have played cross word in korean back to elementary school. I didn't know it exists as a board game. I just played it as a paper. As you said, it is a good way to enhance the vocabulary. It's also like a word chain game. And I'm not also good at card game, actually. kkkk~ But it's just fun playing a game together. I just play a card game with a mind that my goal is not win. I only have significance for participation. However, I still have a mind want to be a winner someday. kkkk~
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Yeah~ I agree~ most of the time, it's the fun that we feel whenever we play enjoyable games and the fun time with the people we enjoy being with matters~~~ ^^ 

Have an enjoyable and fun weekend!~ ^^ Take care always!~~~ ^^ 

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