The summer is comming already.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
These days, the weather was sunny, while it rained sometimes. I love sunny day, so my mood usually pretty good now. The spring is so short, and the weather is warmer and wamer. The cherry blossom bloomed a lot, I have been wanting to show you this scenery. I always take a walk at the park in front of my home every weekends, the landscape was beautiful and I thought of you. Last weekend, it was quite windy so petal of cherry blossom dropped a lot, it looked like petal rain. And it was also like snow. Someday, I will show you cherry blossom in my country through the YouTube!
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!