Business training
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I work at the company that is the largest in Korea. Because our company is a large company with many components, we all had to go through a business training period. Our company always emphasize education. So the training period is longer than other companies training period. The first training was from January to February. The training was about computer programming and Database. Although my job was sales not computer programming and Database, our company gave me the lectures about them as basic training. It was so difficult for me to understand them. The second training was on March. Its period was intensive and it lasted for 3 weeks. I entered the training center. I couldn’t sleep enough because of tough schedules. I had to learn the history of the company, the company’s affiliations, the company’s inner workings and business etiquette. Although the experience was very tough, I learned a lot. I got closer to all of my teammates. I think I had a good start to my new working life.
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