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Making sentences!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm afraid that we only have regular cokes.
I prefer tenderloin than sirloin when I eat steak.
Can you take me a plate the way you coming from kitchen?
As a result that I have watched him, he always eats steak medium well.
My mom will certainly keep me from home tonight.
I don't like over midum eggs, but this restaurant always offers it on the foods.
I want to assist you as a assistant.
Your job is assistant, so you only take care of your boss.
I missed the bus, and could I push back our meeting?
I forgot my appointments and I made another, so I often rescheduled these days.
튜터 교정 답변

I'm afraid that we only have regular cokes.

Better say: I'm afraid we only have regular Coke. 


I prefer tenderloin than sirloin when I eat steak.--**Correct sentence~ ^^ 


Can you take me a plate the way you coming from kitchen?

Better say: Can you take me a plate on your way from the kitchen?


As a result that I have watched him, he always eats steak medium well.

Better say: As a result of what I've observed, he always eats steak medium well.


My mom will certainly keep me from home tonight.

Better say: My mom will certainly keep me from coming home tonight.


I don't like over midum eggs, but this restaurant always offers it on the foods.

Better say: I don't like over medium eggs, yet this restaurant constantly has them on the menu.


I want to assist you as a assistant.

Better say: I'd want to help you as an assistant.


Your job is assistant, so you only take care of your boss.

Better say: Your job is an assistant, so you only take care of your boss.


I missed the bus, and could I push back our meeting? --**Correct sentence~ ^^ 


I forgot my appointments and I made another, so I often rescheduled these days.

Better say: I forgot my appointments and planned another, so I was always rescheduling these days.

 

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