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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 05. 04 조회 3554

I made may YouTube chennal!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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Actually, I didn't tell you about my chennal, I already had a one. I needed more time for preperation of my mind.. I believe you understand me. kkk~ By the way, my chennal name is GREENY, but you certainly can't find my chennal with this. If you search 'y8n23' on the YouTube, my chennal will show the first. I named my chennal GREENY just because I like green. I only uploaded videos about Singapore trip, I will upload time passes like vlog having a day after leaving the company and Japan trip on May. Now my little goal is adding an English subtitles by myself!
튜터 교정 답변

Hello, my dear Jini~ ^^ 

I have already subscribed on your YT channel.~ ^^ I actually used my husband's account because I don't have an account yet.~ kkk~ But, I'm considering in creating one. Been thinking yet of what content will I be focusing on.~ ^^ 

Hey~~ I've watched all of your videos uploaded. ^^ All of those are fun to watch, especially the one when you were in the Universal Studios. I could even hear your cheerful screams. kkkk~~~ so cute~ ^^ Yeah~ I believe you can achieve your goal. ^^ I can be of help if you want.~ ^^ Good luck on your channel!~ ^^ Please upload more and more videos!~ ^^ I'll wait~~~ ^^ 

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