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작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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Oh my god, I'm so shy! kkk~~ When I taked videos, I was shy and had to be cautious. I'm an introvert, so I didn't want to draw others eyes. At the Singapore, it was my first time taking videos, so it was not professional. I didn't decide to upload video even making my channal. I uploaded it to recall our travel. As a result, my friend that went to the Singapore with me said "It's fun and good because I can remine our travel." I think it's a good method to record my life or travels. I will upload some vieos about travel in the Japen. If you make your channel, let me know immediately! Please~~~~
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Hello!~ ^^ 

Well, just like you, I am also an introvert so I am still hesitant in making my own channel. kkk~~ maybe in the future. I'll definitely let you know when I have one.~ ^^ And you're right~ it is certainly a creative and fun way to keep and reminisce all those fun travels you have.~ ^^ So keep uploading.~~~ ^^ 

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