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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 05. 24 조회 3759

Hello, I'm back! I'm talking about my latest trip in Japan~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
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It's been a long time since we called last week! I think my English skill is worse than I went on a trip. kkk~ Because I had no chance to speak in English! I never say Japanese, so it was a hard time for me. By the way, a trip to Nagoya was wonderful! Tokyo was very crowded, and the subway was too complicated. But Nagoya was quite, and we didn't have to ride public transportations. Every place that we wanted to go was around our hotel. We were able to walk everywhere! We went to the Ghibli shop, and I almost fell down. I'll write next essay why I almost fell down. kkkkk!
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It's nice to hear your stories about your wonderful trip.~ ^^ 

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