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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 05. 24 조회 3832

This is second essay about trip to Japan~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Lynda
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
To go on, my favorite movie in the Ghibli is 'The Cat Returns' and the shop was selling a lot of goods about it! I couldn't help buying those. So I bought a glass and a badge. While I wanted to buy a statue of main cat character, the price was expansive.. My second favorite movie is 'My Neighbor Totoro', and I like the 'Catbus' the most. Everyone is frightened this character, but I love it! Ended up, I bought a toy car shaped Catbus and a drawing. Actually, I have bad luck, I usually don't do a drawing. But this time, I couldn't control myself. I will show you these through my videos!
튜터 교정 답변

Hello!~ ^^ 

Wow!~ Can't wait to see your drawings.~ ^^ I'll wait for your videos.~ ^^ 

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