Hello! My new teacher~ This is my first essay to send you.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello~! I'm Jini. My name's pronunciation is the same as Aladin's Genie! kkk~ Please call me whatever you want.
I've been trying to write essay every week. So, this is my first essay to send you. This essay is making sentences with new words from last class. Plase check it!
His drive sense is fantastic! I've never seen this technic!
My doughter always drops foods on her clothes, so I have to carry a baby wipe anytime.
We need more hand sanitizers in front of the main gate.
I wouldn't able to execute this race without my team members.
Every student had high score, and the notch has no meaning.
I've been trying to write essay every week. So, this is my first essay to send you. This essay is making sentences with new words from last class. Plase check it!
His drive sense is fantastic! I've never seen this technic!
My doughter always drops foods on her clothes, so I have to carry a baby wipe anytime.
We need more hand sanitizers in front of the main gate.
I wouldn't able to execute this race without my team members.
Every student had high score, and the notch has no meaning.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!