0603 holiday tradition
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
while Christmas and new year holiday are universal globally but Korean Thanksgiving is a bit unique with mixed ones of the American Thanksgiving and Mexican day of the dead, when all family come back home and prepare for the special food for the deceased.there are 2 kinds of days in Asia and the one is Chinese new year and Thanksgiving day in Asia.
But there are pros and cons.The pros is that we could meet all family who we can not meet often and spend the holiday together and the cons is that the spcial food preparation could be the burden to someone who prepare for these event every ye
But there are pros and cons.The pros is that we could meet all family who we can not meet often and spend the holiday together and the cons is that the spcial food preparation could be the burden to someone who prepare for these event every ye
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