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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 06. 06 조회 3613

I'm talking about my new interest latest~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Angel1
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학생 제출 원문
I've spent boring days these days, and now I found a new interest in my life. Actually, I enjoyed watching movies(still I love it.), after covid 19, film market was down in Korea. So, I didn't go to the theater than berfore, I've usually spent time at home with YouTube. And I was fall in love with F1 latest! I don't know anything about it, I just know some drivers. My favorite driver is Charles Leclerc, and second is Lewis Hamilton. It's not that I have a special reason that I like him. First reason was his cute face, and second is his sense as a driver. Naturally, my favorite team is Ferrari!
튜터 교정 답변
I have been having boring days these days, and now I have found a new interest in my life. I enjoyed watching movies, but after COVID-19, the film market was down in Korea. So, I didn't go to the theater; therefore, I usually spend time at home on YouTube. And I fell in love with the latest F1! I don't know anything about it; I  know some drivers. My favorite driver is Charles Leclerc, and second is Lewis Hamilton. It's not that I have a special reason to like him. The first reason was his cute face, and the second was his sense as a driver. Naturally, my favorite team is Ferrari!
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