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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As I said I like Ferrari, I support this team. But Lewis Hamilton was not in Ferrari this by this year. He's in Mercedes right now, but he's going to move to Ferrari from next year! It was big news for me, and everyone who like F1! Because he was a symbolic driver of Mercedes. So most of people and I supposed that he will leave this team since he retire. The reason that this news was big news for me is that he is my second favorite driver! From next year, both of two drivers that I love will participate F1 as a teammate. It's wonderful news! I'm almost dying wanting to see them..
튜터 교정 답변
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