Hi Nick. I want to check if my English sentences is correct. (6/7)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. My team has brainstorming meetings quite often. My team manage a community application. So we are thinking about ways to help customers communicatie better within the app. We spend two hours every week to analyze other similar services and we update our service.
2. I thought it was difficult for customers to write reviews because they are worried about what to write. So, I suggest that let’s give some example and easy topics so they can post a review more easily. After that, customers began posting reviews more and more easily.
Thanks:)
2. I thought it was difficult for customers to write reviews because they are worried about what to write. So, I suggest that let’s give some example and easy topics so they can post a review more easily. After that, customers began posting reviews more and more easily.
Thanks:)
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