My life is going to be busy..
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Recently I started study to get a diploma. I'd worked as soon as I've graduated high school. I didn't think I had to get a diploma at that time, I just wanted to work. But now, I'm preparing going to the Canada for working holiday, and I wish that I get a permanent residency. So I realized that I need a diploma to raise my points for it. I need to pass two tests and I have to watch lectures. And I also pass a driving test. It will be a hard time, but I'm trying to study hard. I can do it!
튜터 교정 답변
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