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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 06. 22 조회 3777

I think the rainy season is coming..

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Angel1
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The heavy rain is started since this Saturday. The summer came, so the rainy season is follwed. It was pouring a lot about 2 years ago, the city was flooded. At that time, I was working. My house was far from the company, so I decided to get off work as soon as possible. Finally, when I got home, the surrounding area of my company was flooded. My boss said he got home at 11.pm. It was terrible heavy rain. I don't like rain, because it makes me depressed and I've to carry an umbrella at all time. I also dislike getting wet, the rainy season is hard for me. How about you? Do you like rainy day?
튜터 교정 답변

The heavy rain has come this Saturday. The summer came, so the rainy season began. It was pouring a lot about two years ago when the city was flooded. At that time, I was working. My house was far from the company, so I decided to get off work immediately. Finally, when I got home, the surrounding area of my company was flooded. My boss said he got home at 11 p.m. It was terrible, heavy rain. I'm not too fond of rain because it makes me depressed, and I've got to carry an umbrella all the time. Also, I don't particularly appreciate getting wet; the rainy season is hard for me. How about you? Do you like rainy days?

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