My hause
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I live in apartment with my family. It is the first my own house.
I bought it ten years ago. My home has three rooms and a main veranda where I raise flower.
The veranda looks like flower garden. Two rooms were small but i extended their veranda.
So Two rooms became big. Even though my house is ten years old,
it is very clean because my wife clean up a house everyday.
I have a bed and a wardrobe in my room. The wardrobe in my room were built into the walls.
And i have a old TV in my room.
Recently, I bought a new apartment, so i have to sell the old apartment.
I usually relax at home watching TV and growing flowers for refreshing after work.
My house is heaven.
I bought it ten years ago. My home has three rooms and a main veranda where I raise flower.
The veranda looks like flower garden. Two rooms were small but i extended their veranda.
So Two rooms became big. Even though my house is ten years old,
it is very clean because my wife clean up a house everyday.
I have a bed and a wardrobe in my room. The wardrobe in my room were built into the walls.
And i have a old TV in my room.
Recently, I bought a new apartment, so i have to sell the old apartment.
I usually relax at home watching TV and growing flowers for refreshing after work.
My house is heaven.
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