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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 07. 07 조회 3495

Making sentences time~!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Angel1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I can't stand when I see mess.
How do we find your earing in this mess? It looks for a needle in a haystack!
I want to require her clean up my room. Because she is tidy.
I used to work a woman who piles of paper always were on the table.
I think my brother is a neat freak.
I was wondering if these pants come with a belt.
I couldn't believe my eyes! What's happening in my house?
I like meeting new people, so I'm comfortable with strangers.
Would you be able to help carrying this boxes to container?
튜터 교정 답변

I can't stand when I see a mess.
How do we find your ears in this mess? It looks like a needle in a haystack!
I want to have her clean up my room. Because she is tidy.
I used to work with a woman whose piles of paper were always on the table.
I think my brother is a neat freak.
I was wondering if these pants come with a belt.
I couldn't believe my eyes! What's happening in my house?
I like meeting new people, so I'm comfortable with strangers.
Would you be able to help carry these boxes to the container?

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