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Finally, I finished my all task~

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Angel1
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Over the past two weeks, I was so busy. I had to get a driver's license, to study for economy exam, and to take lectures. And now, I got a driver's license, and I took a economy exam. So right now, I'm pretty free. I did all big tasks, I'm going to search room for living in Vancouver during few days. I'm really happy that I can breath freely. I thought that I paid attention lightly to studying English for few weeks, but I'll study it hard again. My English skills are improving with your help~! I always appreciate it!
튜터 교정 답변

Over the past two weeks, I have been so busy. I had to get a driver's license, study for the economy exam, and take lectures. And now I have a driver's license and took an economics exam. So right now, I'm pretty free. I did all the big tasks, and I'm going to search for a room for living in Vancouver in a few days. I'm really happy that I can breathe freely. I thought that I paid attention lightly to studying English for a few weeks, but I'll study it hard again. My English skills are improving with your help! I always appreciate it!

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