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공개 첨삭 완료 2024. 07. 31 조회 3362

Hello my new teacher~!

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi! Nice to meet you~ My name is Jine, and you just call me Jin. It's the same as your name~ I think it's destiny! kkkkk~~
I'm always trying to do my best. But my English skills are bad right now, so I want you teach me. I'm trying to write 2 essays every week, and those are about sentences with new words that I learn last classes. And sometimes I write about my stories, like travel or something. I hope you are happy when you're calling with me! Have a wonderful day~!
튜터 교정 답변

Hi! Nice to meet you. My name is Jine, and you can just call me Jin. It's the same as your name. I think it's destiny!
I'm always trying to do my best but my English skills are bad right now, so I want you teach me. I try to write 2 essays every week, and those are about sentences with new words that I learn in my classes. Sometimes, I write about my experiences, like travel or something. I hope you'll have a great time teaching me. Have a wonderful day!

 

Hi there! I am so excited to talk with you, Jin. I also hope that you'll have a great time learning with me. Have a wonderful day! :)
-Teacher Jin

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