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This is my essay about new words and new expressions.

작성자: whoisthe1222 담당 튜터: Jin1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
How do you like our last business trip?
The design processing is not even started.
I can help you clean your room, if that's OK with you.
I don't agree with this opinion personally.
You can follow this recipe easily because it has nothing but 5 steps.
His moving is robotic.
Please go over this project positively.
Could you feature your portfolio?
If it's not sure, don't tell the name specifically.
We acquired a discount ticket each.
튜터 교정 답변

How do you like our last business trip?
The design processing has not even started yet.
If you don't mind, I can help you clean your room.
Personally, I disagree with this opinion.
You can follow this recipe easily because it has nothing but 5 steps.
His movement is robotic.
Please go over this project positively.
Could you feature your portfolio?
If it's not sure, don't mention the name specifically.
We acquired a discount ticket each.


Hi there! You did a great job constructing sentences here. Keep up the good work!
-Teacher Jin :)

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