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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 14 조회 13082

the places where I enjoy jogging ..

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My favorite place to jog is the fitness center near my office.

It's very big and has a lot of sport facilities for club members' convenience,
so I make use of those facilities to exercise.
I like jogging on a treadmill there,
because there are many people who use it to work out,
and seeing people doing the same thing as I am makes me feel motivated.

I usually jog in the evening after dinner.
But when I go back home to visit my parents, I jog at a park near our house.
The park is a good place because of suitable size and many lights.

One more thing that I like the place is that it's quiet and fewer people so I can jog freely.
I can also see many children at the playground or see old people talking on the benches
as I pass by.

I like those two places to jog.
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My most favorite place to jog is the fitness center nearby my office.

It's very big and has a lot of equipments for club members' convenience.

That's why I use those equipments to exercise.

I like jogging on a treadmill.

Many people use it to exercise.

And seeing other people do it motivates me.

I usually jog in the evening after dinner.

But when I visit my parents' home, I jog nearby their place.

The other place I like jogging at is a quiet place and fewer people so I can jog freely.

I can also see many children at the playground or see old people talking on benches as I pass by.

I like those two places to jog.

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